Aw hell, where do I start. I like the theme of Forrest Dragon (dragons in the forrest). I like your idea of Forrest Dragon (a forrest that is a dragon)better. ^_^ Nice angle. It actually gives me ideas.
I actually like this one better than the refined one -- the pose of the girl is more dynamic, and feels more challenging than the one in the final version.
very cool idea.
keep up the great work